| Reviews for Hands Of A Monster |
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   Yunak chapter 3 . 8/19/2011 This is pretty funny, I feel so bad for colby his friends are jerks. |
| Yunak chapter 3 . 8/19/2011 This is pretty funny, I feel so bad for colby his friends are jerks. |
| mittelan chapter 3 . 8/17/2011 When I got to the end and saw what Lucas had written I snorted. I read it again and then started to giggle. Though I wasn't really surprised by the message, I was expecting something like that haha. Colby's friends seem like huge dickwads. I have to admit when Lucas was first introduced I was like, 'woah man, what a psycho' for each action he did. I really like this story, very.. fun to read. |
| beckett77 chapter 3 . 8/16/2011 I loved this too! I like how you're setting everything up (do I sense the legs of a triangle in the forming?) and the story really is very funny. The contents of Lucas' mysterious prescription made me laugh aloud. I wish I had more time to leave a long review, but alas, real life calls. How about in exchange for more chapters I leave better reviews? (Yes, I am totally obnoxious. Why do you ask? :P) Thanks for writing! |
| abbey chapter 3 . 8/7/2011 soooo funny |
| AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 3 . 7/31/2011 Holy crab cakes! This story is awesome! And I can't deny I felt a bit giddy at the whole seven-minutes-in-heaven fiasco! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Arisa Ash chapter 3 . 7/30/2011 I don't- why was his blood blue? When is human blood ever blue? This confused me. For a second, I actually thought this story was a Fantasy or something, but it was just a common misconception. This story isn't bad at all. I'm happy to be reading something from near the beginning so that I'll leave feedback on every chapter. I noticed that you're a bit long-winded when you write. It's not too bad, but I often find myself skipping entire paragraphs and not really missing much. I haven't noticed any spelling errors (though I wasn't looking), or grammatical errors, which is highly refreshing. I can tell Lucas is going to be my favorite character. He's quirky; germaphobes are adorable. Also, we agree on the need of more 'dick in the ass.' Hehe, that made me giggle. Update soon! |
| Smile101 chapter 3 . 7/29/2011 This is so hilarious. Scary too. The note was so funny at the end. Colby needs to be careful. Can't wait to read Colby's reaction to it. :D Thanks for the update! |
| Calla chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 Omg a new story! I love it, especially Colby. Hahaha persciption part was predictable but sooo funny and hot! Oh and please please please up date power trip and soul bound ) I was so sure that there was going to be some sexy time in doc's office, and disappointed that there wasn't, maybe you can add that when Colby returns to get his results D |
| sssmelmel chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 AHAHA, I really hope that Colby follows Lucas' instructions because like he said, he just might die if he doesn't get more dick up his ass! |
| Sapphire2619 chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 Good story so far, though I did not like Lucas's crazy shouting and banging stuff, a little too violent to make a good character |
| partie traumatic chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 I find this story very funny. Can't wait to read more. |
| ThE wRiTeR mY wOrDs My SoUl chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 OHMYGOD! I LOVE LUCAS! MAN THIS IS KILLING ME! HE's pretty much like... well yeah... I'm going to rape your ass, if you're not willing, and since you don't want it anyways... it'll be rape eitehr way. That's like... so hot. And his friends... lol. Wow, I can tell they want some Colby action too (Snickers). I cannot wait to see where you go with this. Seriously. I love this story so much! : ) |
| yaoi8808 chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 BUAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE THE PRESCRIPTION AT THE END! |
| leila-blue chapter 3 . 7/28/2011 xD i'm starting to really like lucas |