Reviews for Hands Of A Monster
Esquirella chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
This is a hell of a great start! I'm wondering what Lucas will do next. Great character!
Quirk'd chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
I'm amazed.

Here I was, expecting a smutty chapter which, though welcome, is very cliche and unoriginal. You entirely skipped that portion, gave us a wonderful asshole of a different kind.

Oh, Lucas.

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, as always.

Thank you, Calico Trayce.

~Quirk'd
Nebulad chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
I think I know way too many people like Ashton

I really hope this continues :D
The12Lies chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
LOVE IT! The story line is great so far, I'm excited for the next chapter.D
Vivus chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Aw poor Colby he's really freaking out (laughs maniacally to myself) oh god I really love how Lucas is such a controlling jerk, that part where he bleached Colby's clothes so he wouldn't leave was genius. I have a feeling Lucas finds Colby's stubborness sexy :P. Hehehhe, loved it! I wonder what Ashton's going to do, he seems like he cares more about Colby then Triston does. Oh and also Lucas seemed ticked off that Colby thought he was Ashton, it makes me wonder if Lucas is going to go all jealous stalker and beat up Ashton sometime... anyway, this just made my day! Thank you for the yummy slash goodness!
Enchantedflame chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Lucas seems like a lonely man who steals younger men from clubs and bars lol. I would like to see more of him though. Can't wait for ch.3!
eatery667 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Interesting introductiong, but need more to the plot to say if it was good. My way of saying chain yourself to the computer and crank out 10 more chapters in a week :)
kawaii-kitsune-thief chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Oooh, Where's Colby going to end up? I like the character that you've created and the dynamic between him and his friends. I'm interested to see where this goes.
sssmelmel chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
MOOOOOORE! I like Colby, and I need to know who this Tall, Dark, and Handsome is. ; D
anydayanywhere chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
This is a really interestimng story so far~! I can't wait to find out who that mysterious man is. :D
leila-blue chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
oh poor colbie, this is already really interesting, i'm already looking forward to the chapters to come!
Drowning Ninja chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
This is one story you have told me nothing about! I'm so calling you tomorrow and also we need to go to Wok Box now...You make me want Butter Chicken!

I'm looking forward to more its bifferent and quite good. I like

bye for now!
Blank Papyrus chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Interesting. I wanna see what happens!
Untitled Absence chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Poor Colby! So adamant about not drinking, yet so ineffectual at making it not happen, even when he knows the outcome won't change. Gotta love a guy for trying, they say.

Pure yaoi isn't one of my primary interests, as you may have realized by now, but I'm always drawn to a well-written story, especially by author's I already follow and respect. I'm also a sucker for the innocent ones (_;;)

I'll be keeping an eye on this, and I'm unlikely to review each and every chapter, but...well, we know how to get a hold of each other by now, I'd say :P

Good luck and keep at it,

Rubedo Jr.
Vivus chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Ooohh new story :) I like it so far, personally I really enjoy Ashton's and Tristan's banter. I like Colby's character too, he must not be very social since he is still friends with those jerks. I am excited to find out how this stranger is a monster :D the ending was very mysterious and I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the new brain candy.
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