Colby has the least amount of willpower in the world lol and he really doesn't think things through does he? If he doesn't trust or like Lucas, why get in his car? Le sigh, what will I do with him? lol

So Colby's been getting roofied this entire time. So not only have Ashton and Tristan allowed him to act like a horn dog all this time and not tell him, but they've been using drugs to get him to that state in the first place? How messed up is that? He most definitely better have words with them.

Meanwhile, Lucas doesn't seem so crazy after all. He actually seems like a nice guy who's easily frustrated by Colby. That's not too bad.

Side note: I love Hoadley. Just thought I'd let you know.

Ok, so it seems I'm going to be going back and forth about how I feel about Ashton. Right now, it's leaning more towards dislike. Tristan too. No wonder they always want to get Colby drunk. How sucky of them to take advantage of his...lightweightedness. I understand they want to have fun with their friend, but there are better ways to go about. And they could've told him before he taken him home by a stranger. Apparently, people don't think about these things until something bad happens. Yes, Colby should definitely take a break from them.

Lucas is a doctor! Say what?! lol I think it's pretty awesome. If anything, it makes me like him more. I am glad he didn't try to take advantage of Colby in that room, but his prescription was hilarious and completely accurate. I'm actually looking forward to it myself. Does that make me a bad person seeing as Colby wants nothing to do with him? Eh, I'll deal with it.

Another great chapter!

Lucas? Real crazy. But...it's not that bad. Don't get me wrong; if I was in Colby's position, I'd be thoroughly freaked out. But I'm simply a reader, and I kinda enjoy Lucas lol. I will say that it was so not cool of him to have sex with Colby when he was clearly drunk off his ass, but what can we do? At least he's not psycho killer crazy...hopefully.

I guess I like Ashton a little bit more knowing that he was actually concerned about his friend enough to go looking for him when he left the club and then come check in on him at work. That's nice.

I'm still loving Colby. I can't wait to see how things end up when or if he actually does see Lucas again. Great chapter!

So I quite enjoy Colby. It's too bad his friends are nothing but party-goers looking for their next hookup because if not I would like them too.

I can understand Colby's position. I too have friends who just want to party and drink while I'd rather stay in. I also have a hard time resisting the urge to indulge in a drink or two. I do think I have more willpower than Colby, though lol though in his defense, he was about to get kicked out of the club. However, it probably would've been for the best; at least he could've kept to his word about not drinking. Especially when he's such a lightweight.

So he's going home with a stranger. This should be interesting...

I choked on my chips. Seriously. It took me a while to calm down after reading the ending XD. My mom even came into my room to see if I was okay haha.

God that was great. Smexy, enjoyable, hot, fun, hot, hot. Did I say hot?

Thanks so much for sharing this story. It was a perfect Christmas gift for me.

Can I just say, I love this story! Colby is so freaking adorable and I just love, love, love Lucas. I can't wait to read the spinoff because YES I totally ship Ashton and Hoadly(?)

Wow, that story went by really fast. It felt like the entire narrative happened in like DAYS (weeks?) and everything went to action in this chapter. It was a real fun ride, but the entire story seemed like a long one-shot. Not that I'm complaining. I actually enjoyed the hot scenes. If truth be told, I think you're getting better and much more creative describing all them sexeh tiems. Haha!

"God Help Him" seem like a play on all of the three main characters - Colby, Lucas and Ashton. Everything just went crazy in this chapter, and I was surprised to see that it seemed to be designed as a finishing chapter when it sounds like a climax one. I wonder if there'd be a resolution for all of them. Everything seem to be in a cliffhang scene. Tristan's warnings. Colby's sudden declaration of affection for Lucas. Ashton's next move. Even Lucas' plans for the future.

More? Pretty please?

hello,
I love what you did with this story, maybe it was too short for my taste plus at some point a little bit too cheesy but hey ! it's been a long time since I read some new type of storie :) Colby charactere is unique too, that why I love it ! They both make a great combinaison

OMG Roger Jaminson, I think you are my FF Soulmate or something because YOUR THOUGHTS ARE MINE EXACTLY. I want a foursome of Ashton/Hoadley/Luke/Colby too! And yes, exactly in the way you said it, like the bottoms would be kissing and stroking each other while the tops...thrust hard. Lol.

So they have an inferior complex. Because of that they drugged their friend ? They're assholes !
And finally Colby has a boyfriend ! lol !
Glad for Lucas.
Yes Yes please an épilogue. Can't wait. Until then take care.

Gasp. You tease.

Oh ho!

I'll be honest. I didn't see the ending coming so soon, here thinking we had a few more chapters at least. Not complaining, just saying.

I do state. Colby's last line was a little unsettling.

"'It's not rape anymore.'"

Like, I know it's a person's right to decide whether they've been violated or not, what to call it and such, but the fact Colby once considered it rape... I don't know. This sort of implies that Colby saw it as a rape, had an understanding or a coming to terms with it and decided to put in a new light. Or maybe it means that Colby saw it once as rape, discovered the circumstances around it, decided that the title rape wasn't appropriate for what happened between himself and Lucas. Okay, typing this out made me realize that the latter sounds better and makes more sense. Yay. Feeling of unease removed!

Anyway. Dude, I see you have another story about Ashton and Hoadley, which I full heartedly support. That one line about Ashton's ass firing up Hoadley got to me. Ship! Ship! Raise the sails! 'Cause we gonna ship! With that summary you got, I can already imagine it. Ashton riding Hoadley sounds so beautiful already. I can't wait to munch on that story. Not yet though. Have to review this first. Fingers... can't... type... fast... enough!

Anyway! Damn, so Tristan and Ashton drugged Colby? I mean the hint is so heavy I believe Hoadley would have trouble lifting it. I wonder why. I mean, I know why. Fun Colby and shit, but didn't one of them at least stop to think that it was their friend whose state of mind and body they were messing with.

And I feel for Colby right now. A little more than usual. You will not believe what happened to me the other day. I was beat from work and so I come home to find the rest of the gang working off their high watching Jeopardy I think. Whatever, but when I get into my bed, I notice that the other end of the bed was wet, a bit warm and just disgustingly smushy. After close inspection, I conclude it's fucking barf. I know. I know. How did I not notice it at first? And what the fuck happened? The roommate, a total innocent babe when it comes to drugs, decided to join the gang and try some. THEY CONVINCED HIM TO SMOKE AND DO A LINE IN A 1-1-2 PATTERN. Jesus Christ. I found him in the bathroom crying and throwing up. I couldn't understand the words coming from his mouth, but the kid had a bad trip. Poor baby. Even now the arrows of pity strike the heart.

I'm still really mad at the gang.

Anyway, this isn't a confession but I felt it held some relevance. I feel for Colby. It's hurts to have some irresponsible, immature, perspective-intolerant people for friends. It's like, "Wow, these are my friends. These are the poeple who I spend my time with." But with these thoughts out there, it can easily be confirmed what Tristan said as true. If Colby thought like this (and he did, didn't he?), there's that sort of condescension obvious to be found in ourselves and it's not like we're any better (Did you know apparently I let someone light a blunt while half of it was inside of me? I don't remember, but they say that's how the oarty ended.) And with that sort of logic it ties back go justifying why we've stuck around with our amigos for so long.

Ugh. I've rambled and I think I don't any sense. Sorry, just delete this if it's too horrible to read. Colby and his boys just hit home, that's all.

Anyway, that sex scene was hot. I couldn't wait for Colby to wake up enough to enjoy the awesome of getting his ass stuffed with dick. Dicks rule, man. (Don't worry. Vaginas too.) The way Lucas loses himself over Colby and vice versa.

Something that caught my attention and I was digging real hard. That light hint that Ashton sort of maybe or unknowingly likes Colby the way Colby once liked him. This idea of something that could have been is tantalizing. And with that summary about Hoadley and Ashton hooking up, I'll be thinking about foursomes. Awwwwww yeahhhh. Ashton and Colby kissing and shit while being fucked by their respective partners. Oh yeah. The only thing making this uber unrealistic is Lucas. Seeing how territorial and possessive he is, not to mention hateful of Ashton, I doubt that could happen. If only an author could... (Obvious hints are obvious)

I love this story. I love you. I can't wait to read Fifty-Fifty. I saw five chapters were up. Yay!

By the way, I blame any non sense on the lack of sleep. (Sucking your dick in my dreams)

A special mention to June, who's "shit-eating grin" line gave me a shit-eating grin throughout the chapter, which is noticeably long, mind you, one of the unusual uber-detailed chapters. With low-smut and a pinch of plot progression. Hahaha! Also, do you watch Gotham, Calico? They also have a Dr. Thompkins there, and she's REALLY pretty (she's Inara from the series Firefly and movie Serenity, too!).

Anyways, moving on. This 9th chapter of this narrative is densely packed, like a going-away present for your readers before the Las Vegas trip. Haha! It contains a lot of insight regarding Lucas' lifestyle, how exhausting his work sounds like, and a brief glimpse on his relationship with other people besides Colby. I like this view, because it somewhat humanizes Lucas' character. That he's not cliché hot, responsible, smut-talking doctor out of a woman's dizziest daydreams. Hahaha! I actually yearn more for background information on Lucas' life.

And oh, it's so good that Lucas can now ge through Colby's bullshit. And that sex in the office. I do hope they cleaned up well after that. I bet that room smelled of SEX. Haha!

In this chapter, there are some things you should know: Lucas is hopelessly devoted to Colby, and the young student is desperate to understand what he's feeling.

It's amazing how two people so "sexually compatible" could be on two opposite sides of the spectrum. Lucas is as honest to Colby as he was about his entire lifestyle (and disorder); meanwhile, Colby is lying so much that nothing makes sense to him anymore. The romantic spark between them seem to fizzling out because of Colby, his compulsive lying and his terrible need to use Lucas in making sense of himself; honestly, I'm starting to dislike Colby, Calico. He was mean and self-centered. Even Dark Lucas was nothing compared to normal Colby, but they are the mains after all.

Personal feelings aside, I am amazed on how you juggle these two characters in a specific scene because they are so much unlike each other that everything they do to each other is a cause for conflict. But then again, where's the excitement when you have two main characters extremely alike?