"This whole story just turned entirely into smut and lemons...it's all Luke's fault." LOL I think I know exactly what you mean. I've had stories that started out as real stories, but then one of the characters was just way too sexual, and I'd had several pages of smut come out that I had to remove later-it wasn't me-it was the character's fault!

Instant Review: Hot, but awkward.
"A/N...detail your thoughts to me." Umm, okay.
's inner thoughts while reading this chapter:
Oh, cool, the backstory-nice. Good continuity. Okay, taking an obviously drunk guy home, not the smartest move but he's hot, I get it. Sexy. Practical. Sexy again, good. More practicality, okay. "Outside his door, Lucas put the key in the lock-" Oh for fucks sake, just get to the fucking already! *skims* Fingering, okay, this is hot, this is good... Hm, lovey feelings? That's a little quick but okay... OMG that dirty talk is HOT- wait, a lot of lovey feelings. Okay, saying "I love you" to a drunk person you don't know but you're currently ass deep in is just weird. *skims* OMG that dirty talk, yesssss, hot, HOT! And done.

Love It!

Your story is great! It has the drama, the stubborn and soon to be mutual love, and the suspense of what's going to happen to the douchebag friends and more.

It's deff added to my favorite list/follow.

This story is just plain awesome. I missed it when it was first uploaded but I've got totally hooked on it. Lucas is so brilliantly intense, and the smut is actually beyond hot. Christ, it's perfection.
Hope your trip is treating you well!
C.A

It's cool to see you're still around, Ms. Calico Trayce. This site is a bit washed up, but I still check in sometimes. Was glad to see you post. I'll check out the work when I can.

You're really pretty good with the all smex scene. Very HOT. Colby doesn't stand a chance with Luke. :) I can't wait for the confrontation with the 'friends'.
Take care...

Haha oh my gosh so hot! I love it! The one thing that bugs me is the fact that Lucas calls Colby baby all the time but that's his character and it seems that Colby dislikes it as well haha. But anyways I love it and we're going to have a blast in Vegas! As always I love ya!

Yeeeeeeeeessssss. I love this man.
I really want another chapter from colby's POV though. I'd love to know what he's thinking during all this smut.
I still would love to see these two in a brat/top relationship. Which honestly it's pretty much exactly that already. But you know what i mean.
Enjoy vegas! I can wait somewhat patiently for the next chapter. :D

Colby seduces with insults. XD

Loveddddddddddddd it! Super good!
Can't wait for more!

Oh my fuck. My third time reading this chapter... such a masterpiece

Update soon, I'll be refreshing ;)

Waiting for the next!

Oh my fucking god I love this. Lucas is just sooo perfect for Colby. The lemons are really well written and maybe even the best I've ever read omg. More pleaaaaase!

Gush time! *clears throat* Ahem... OH MY GAWD I LOVED THIS! God these two are just too perfect together. You really make me wish I was born a gay man so I could find someone like Lucas LOL. Thanks for another amazing chapter and have fun in Vegas! I was there once and stayed at the Luxor. It was awesome!

Yeeeeeeeees this is going great, Colby's slowly getting used to his man :p loving this so much, I think Luke it's kind of learning to handle Colby better too, without changing who he is and that's great!