Reviews for Termination
Wonder46 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
That was awesome. Gory, bloody, sad, but really well written. It's creepily genius.
Eleantris chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Wow. This is AMAZING. I was hanging from every word you wrote here, and I definitely think this is your best piece of work yet. I absolutely loved it! This was so gripping, and I really got such a feel for the atmosphere and for someone who says they're not always really into murder stories, you wrote one fantastic poem about a murderer's motives here! Fantastic work, you should be really proud of this! And because this was so awesome, I will definitely check out your friend's story.

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Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
That was brillant! The last line gave me goosebumps! Thank u so much for writing this for me! Its awesome and I'm so glad that you read my stuff! Ur awesome!