|Reviews for reality|
| anachronistic chapter 10 . 5/26/2012
oh my god this is. literally perfect as in i would not change anything about it at all wow fuck
"leaving me to rot in my / gilded happiness" is. a fucking a
| It's I who promised 10 reviews chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
BEST MULTI CHAPTER YOU"VE EVER WRITTEN! Holycrap! This was amazing! And this chapter was sooo cute!
people complain about how i "always want it all". that isn't true, not in the slightest. i only want what's good; i don't want everything, because everything can't give me what i want.
everything can't give me you.
I LOVE THAT! SERIOUSLY!
YOU HAVE TALENT!
I CANT STOP TYPING IN CAPS!
| It's I who promised 10 reviews chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
i write these poems
to free myself from this world
that says i'm worthless
[ —i'll prove them wrong ] That's my favorite line, and that's exactly why I write poems too.12
I can really relate to alot of your works.
Nice job! I can't wait to read more!
(1 more to go I think!) :p
| anachronistic chapter 9 . 1/29/2012
preach it, guuuurl
| onze chapter 9 . 1/26/2012
i can relate so, so much. :'D
but yeah, very sexysexy. keep it up.
| a theoretic revolution chapter 9 . 1/25/2012
"everything can't give me you."
gah, so...speechless. this chapter, this whole pillowbook really is just so good! keep it up darling, you're going places :)
| anachronistic chapter 8 . 1/14/2012
there is a certain "thing" this piece has that has me madly in love with it. i don't know what, but it's there. a, would read again.
| becquerel chapter 8 . 1/5/2012
short and attractive. me likey.
| becquerel chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
very, very nice.
oh you & your productivity. :C
i liked this a lot. :D
just one thing tho, & i thing yodes pointed it out. "worst" would be the correct word, rather than "worse" & yeah.
| anachronistic chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
heh. the ever-present writer's frustration. writer's block. writer's i-want-to-stick-a-metal-rod-into-this-computer-screen.
nitpick: the earliest form of "writing" was around 3500 bce? which is far off from 13000. :D also, "being the worst" and not worse.
/shot ded for willfully ignoring artistic license
but anyway. chill. nice. good. great. very true, very easy to sympathize. i think everyone can.
| becquerel chapter 6 . 8/24/2011
beautiful, bro. so much feeling, so few words.
i love the format, too. very creative.
& so melancholy, but in a way that one can understand, like,
in a way one can relate to.
all in all, great work.
keep it up.
(also i ttly realize i haven't read or reviewed chapter five, nor did i receive an alert for it. :/ gdi fp, y u break my balls?)
| anachronistic chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
this is depressing
and you know how i feel about depressing and sad things
anyway nice pretty keep up the work
| anachronistic chapter 5 . 8/12/2011
this is cool
i like how you word things it's very eloquent and refined
| anachronistic chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
autumn's not that bad, i'm sure & hope you feel better
| becquerel chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
wonderful as always,
hope you feel better.