Reviews for reality
anachronistic chapter 10 . 5/26/2012
oh my god this is. literally perfect as in i would not change anything about it at all wow fuck

"leaving me to rot in my / gilded happiness" is. a fucking a
It's I who promised 10 reviews chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
OHHMAAGAAAAWWWDDDD!

BEST MULTI CHAPTER YOU"VE EVER WRITTEN! Holycrap! This was amazing! And this chapter was sooo cute!

people complain about how i "always want it all". that isn't true, not in the slightest. i only want what's good; i don't want everything, because everything can't give me what i want.

everything can't give me you.

I LOVE THAT! SERIOUSLY!

YOU HAVE TALENT!

I CANT STOP TYPING IN CAPS!

AHHH!

:P
It's I who promised 10 reviews chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
i write these poems

to free myself from this world

that says i'm worthless

[ —i'll prove them wrong ] That's my favorite line, and that's exactly why I write poems too.12

I can really relate to alot of your works.

Nice job! I can't wait to read more!

(1 more to go I think!) :p
anachronistic chapter 9 . 1/29/2012
w ow

preach it, guuuurl
onze chapter 9 . 1/26/2012
i can relate so, so much. :'D

but yeah, very sexysexy. keep it up.
a theoretic revolution chapter 9 . 1/25/2012
"everything can't give me you."

gah, so...speechless. this chapter, this whole pillowbook really is just so good! keep it up darling, you're going places :)
anachronistic chapter 8 . 1/14/2012
there is a certain "thing" this piece has that has me madly in love with it. i don't know what, but it's there. a, would read again.
becquerel chapter 8 . 1/5/2012
short and attractive. me likey.
becquerel chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
very, very nice.

oh you & your productivity. :C

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i liked this a lot. :D

just one thing tho, & i thing yodes pointed it out. "worst" would be the correct word, rather than "worse" & yeah.

C:
anachronistic chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
heh. the ever-present writer's frustration. writer's block. writer's i-want-to-stick-a-metal-rod-into-this-computer-screen.

nitpick: the earliest form of "writing" was around 3500 bce? which is far off from 13000. :D also, "being the worst" and not worse.

/shot ded for willfully ignoring artistic license

but anyway. chill. nice. good. great. very true, very easy to sympathize. i think everyone can.
becquerel chapter 6 . 8/24/2011
beautiful, bro. so much feeling, so few words.

i love the format, too. very creative.

& so melancholy, but in a way that one can understand, like,

in a way one can relate to.

all in all, great work.

keep it up.

(also i ttly realize i haven't read or reviewed chapter five, nor did i receive an alert for it. :/ gdi fp, y u break my balls?)
anachronistic chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
this is depressing

and sad

and you know how i feel about depressing and sad things

anyway nice pretty keep up the work
anachronistic chapter 5 . 8/12/2011
this is cool

i like how you word things it's very eloquent and refined
anachronistic chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
autumn's not that bad, i'm sure & hope you feel better
becquerel chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
wonderful as always,

hope you feel better.
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