|Reviews for Look Around You|
| peppermint latte chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Thank you for writing this...it really, truly made me a bit less crazy.
| megger chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
"thoughts on Suicide?" a voice"- Suicide shouldn't be capitalized.
This was an enlightening piece. I had a feeling that Mr. Ayase wasn't entirely human.
In regards to your AN, suicide, to me, isn't cowardly. It's circumstantial and a touchy subject. I find it a bit tactless to call someone who committed suicide a coward (I'm totally not saying that you're one of those people, btw) I think what's cowardly is taking the abuse and not doing anything about it.
| ficfan chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
There's a deepness to this story. It's quite thrilling.
The way the old man was actually a ghost, the way their dialogue seemed to flow as if the old man knew exactly what she was thinking, it's amazing.
There was one line that didn't seem to fit, well, for me; 'She sobbed, raising her leg back and standing.' How can she sob while she stood up at the edge of a rooftop? Well, it is your writing.
All in all, the story is quite inspiring. I almost seem to think like you wrote this from experience. Please write more, I'd like to hear more from you.