Reviews for Complex Simplicity
seadrop chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
You're amazing.

I love how you made a geek and a popular girl together. It's so unlike those "shy girl and jock" stories. My only problem is some awkward sentences and repetitive words, and the lack of information in the end. Seriously. I would've appreciated more squealing part and a happily ever after. I'm just mushy like that. :P

But still. This is so in my Favorites.

Reuben DeFlash chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I liked it and I think it could easily evolve into a massive indepth story. My only issue was the arranged marriage thing - it just seemed a bit out of place - but you made it work, so it hardly mattered :)
baroque creams chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
its a good piece of writing, but i feel like you are trying to express someone else's style. it doesn't feel natural, doesn't flow that well. and the part about the marriage, the geek and the popular chick, the cheesy lines - feels like a combination of stuff you've picked up from reading the high review stuff. my advice is to be original with your work. you are a good writer, you just need to find yourself inside the writing.
Nelly chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
This is beautiful :)