Reviews for The Girl's Not Right
OptimisticRomantic chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
I LOVED THIS...i can relate..they say the same bout me..if only they knew wut was in my mind heh... GREAT PEICE!

aleppine chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
This is gorgeous ... love the broken rhyme scheme, the bouncy easy-going rhythm that it creates ... love the repetition of 'light' and the random little images. 'the light that keeps me at the brink, spilled in ink, on the outskirts of the Sanskrit' ... brilliant. Bravo. Excelente. Magnifique.
Storm13 chapter 1 . 8/19/2002
Lol it's a great poem aqua...kinda twisted but so's your sense of humour.

I'd right a poem about my mind, but it'd all be sarcasm and witticisms and crazy fantasies and plot ideas...because that's exactly what my mind is like and you might find all the sarcasm getting kinda old
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/1/2002
Ooo...sweet poem, it tis! Did you make your email and one of your s/n's from the poem's title? hm..kew ..I like the part bout 'liquid light'
Silver Sunlight chapter 1 . 12/11/2001
I adore this poem, and it honestly made me want to cry. It's sad and full of feeling, which is rare, almost as rare as truly good poetry. Thank you for reviewing my poem: 'Just Short of Existing' You were fairly close to what was actually put into it. Good job on this one! May favorite line is: Physically unable

No fault of my own

Mentally unstable

It's very well written and it flows perfectly. Great job again!
audig chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
oooooooooooooooooooooooo... creepy but good!
unknown7 chapter 1 . 9/1/2001
This poem said a lot of things. It sounds like you threw it all out or something. I like this one too ;)
Fading chapter 1 . 8/22/2001
OMG if I didn't know any better I would say you were writting about me! GREAT POEM! YAY, I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO ISN'T AS SHE SEEMS! Keep up the good writting...
The other girl with issues chapter 1 . 7/16/2001
This peom is the best I ever heard. I can relate to it, and you are a good poet. It sounds like a rap song, but it's definitly a masterpiece.
stratzyda chapter 1 . 6/5/2001
That was really good. I like how it's a circle.