| Reviews for The Day Before |
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   Cyclonica chapter 1 . 3/6/2005 That could be made into a really compelling song. I was singing it in my head as I read it. It's really good. |
| Sike-a-delic Grasshopper chapter 1 . 8/9/2004 Wow, that's really shocking. I like it. You had a nice buildup to the end. Very well done. |
| CellarDoorX321 chapter 1 . 11/5/2003 Great job! I really liked this one. I love how you arranged the paragraphs. |
| browneyedgoddess87 chapter 1 . 8/20/2003 Wow! That was just breathtakingly beautiful. Sometimes I feel like slitting my wrists, when I'm really miserable... but then I don't, obviously. Life is a bitch and then you die ;) Anyway, so you're an X-Men fan and I'm a writer of that fandom ::laugh:: On under "blustarzengel3" you'll find my X-Men fic called "Awakening". I hope u read it and review! ~ goddess |
| OptimisticRomantic chapter 1 . 5/12/2003 U ARE REMARKABLE..u have such great talent...I want talent like urs but then i don't coz i won't be able to read ur greatness and will b writing my own...this is very beautiful...It gives you a new look on life..damn girl i'm hooked to ur poems ~_ SAndra |
| until strawberry sherbert chapter 1 . 2/23/2002 Very depressing... interesting, a new point of view for a lot of people (not for me though.) It sounds more like a song than a poem, but whatever :) -untilstrawberrysherbert PS I decided since you were nice and reviewed one of my stories I'd review some of yours o |
| audig chapter 1 . 11/28/2001 what happens when no one notices tis'! melikes! |
| Storm13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2001 blitz this is so depressing,oh my god, when did you write this? |
| Angel Fujin chapter 1 . 8/31/2001 Yes yes YES beautful very pretty and sad |
| Cerberus chapter 1 . 8/29/2001 *tears* I loved it! I could never write something that good. |
| Fading chapter 1 . 8/22/2001 I really like that poem. I guess I hits me pretty hard though because I left on of my friends for dead, then she and other of my friends came back and did the same to me. I guess they have no reason to think otherwise though. I really do like this poem. It is sad and depressing but that's they way I like things. I think that it is really expressive and really well written. I look forward to reading more from you! |
| The other girl with issues chapter 1 . 7/16/2001 This poem is so cool. Kinda sad, but totally good. |
| black fairy chapter 1 . 7/14/2001 I like this very much. It's like a song. Very good work. My favorite part is the parts I guess you could call the 'chorus'. Keep up the good work. |
| Battykat chapter 1 . 6/11/2001 brilliant. sadly true, but ver lyrical, could hear a tune to it as I read it, feels like a song? great work, keep writing. |
| Audrey McMarlin chapter 1 . 5/25/2001 wow... i like it! it's very good! |