Reviews for The Day Before
Cyclonica chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
That could be made into a really compelling song. I was singing it in my head as I read it. It's really good.
Sike-a-delic Grasshopper chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Wow, that's really shocking. I like it. You had a nice buildup to the end. Very well done.
CellarDoorX321 chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Great job! I really liked this one. I love how you arranged the paragraphs.
browneyedgoddess87 chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Wow! That was just breathtakingly beautiful. Sometimes I feel like slitting my wrists, when I'm really miserable... but then I don't, obviously. Life is a bitch and then you die ;) Anyway, so you're an X-Men fan and I'm a writer of that fandom ::laugh:: On under "blustarzengel3" you'll find my X-Men fic called "Awakening". I hope u read it and review! ~ goddess
OptimisticRomantic chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
U ARE REMARKABLE..u have such great talent...I want talent like urs but then i don't coz i won't be able to read ur greatness and will b writing my own...this is very beautiful...It gives you a new look on life..damn girl i'm hooked to ur poems ~_

until strawberry sherbert chapter 1 . 2/23/2002
Very depressing... interesting, a new point of view for a lot of people (not for me though.)

It sounds more like a song than a poem, but whatever :)


PS I decided since you were nice and reviewed one of my stories I'd review some of yours o
audig chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
what happens when no one notices tis'! melikes!
Storm13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
blitz this is so depressing,oh my god, when did you write this?
Angel Fujin chapter 1 . 8/31/2001
Yes yes YES beautful very pretty and sad
Cerberus chapter 1 . 8/29/2001
*tears* I loved it! I could never write something that good.
Fading chapter 1 . 8/22/2001
I really like that poem. I guess I hits me pretty hard though because I left on of my friends for dead, then she and other of my friends came back and did the same to me. I guess they have no reason to think otherwise though. I really do like this poem. It is sad and depressing but that's they way I like things. I think that it is really expressive and really well written. I look forward to reading more from you!
The other girl with issues chapter 1 . 7/16/2001
This poem is so cool. Kinda sad, but totally good.
black fairy chapter 1 . 7/14/2001
I like this very much. It's like a song. Very good work. My favorite part is the parts I guess you could call the 'chorus'. Keep up the good work.
Battykat chapter 1 . 6/11/2001
brilliant. sadly true, but ver lyrical, could hear a tune to it as I read it, feels like a song? great work, keep writing.
Audrey McMarlin chapter 1 . 5/25/2001
wow... i like it! it's very good!
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