Reviews for The Watcher
TheShadow666 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
That's a cool short story thing. With the voices and her suppressed memory of who she was andbif she had a family makes it aound muateeious and this short story is ptrtty awesome to read
Lardlax chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Really really enjoyed this. A little off-beat and weird (always a good thing in my books) and the narrative voice was spot on. You clearly have a lot of talent for prose and I really hope you do a longer piece one day :)
Hitokiri Shinzui chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
wow...that was...weird, to say the least. but, in a good way! intriguing-like, you know?
Seria Ellan chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I love the way you bring the reader inside the story. It almost feels as though the reader is a new voice in the characters head.