Reviews for Coverter's Cloth
SKayeB chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Delightfully depressing and wonderfully grisly. Though there are flaws in you're puncuation (I'm a grammar nazi and probably use way more commas than needed, so don't hold me to it), you did a good job making this sound more realistic with your descriptions. You have to make sure you keep this real and don't go over board with the fantasy stuff to make this as un-cheesey as possible, and commas (Again, I may be wrong) would make the reader slow down and get all the deatails. Interesting first chapter. Keep it up.