Reviews for I'll Always Be There
blissful life chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
awwwwwww!

This is SOOO sad! :'(

T_T

Great job, by the way! :)
Crystal Eternal chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Nice simple story!

One mistake I found: "Her screams is cut of."

But the guy is pretty creepy, haha. If you want to add more depth and feeling to the story, try and build up the description a little.

Anyway - good job on the story! (: