|Reviews for I'll Always Be There|
| blissful life chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
This is SOOO sad! :'(
Great job, by the way! :)
| Crystal Eternal chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Nice simple story!
One mistake I found: "Her screams is cut of."
But the guy is pretty creepy, haha. If you want to add more depth and feeling to the story, try and build up the description a little.
Anyway - good job on the story! (: