Reviews for I Promise
Katchiri Black chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Moved. Me. To. Tears.

Katchiri.
SKayeB chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Awww moment... You just about had me crying in the middle. To run through the technical stuff, you wrote it wonderfully. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, all that stuff lived up to my grammar nazi standards. My only critique is that the twist, where he said he wouldn't jump, didn't deliver quite right. It may have been me, but the panic she was feeling made me want to jump ahead and find out what's going on. I'm a fast reader, so that may have been it... Anyway, wonderfully almost-depressing story! It takes quite a story to make me cry!