Reviews for listen
D. Cowman chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I agree. I like how you display intuition:

"a seamless unfeeling"

Good stuff.
classic violet chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Beautiful. I relate to this completely. Music is powerful. Absolutely wonderful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
"white noise brush ears,"... brushes

"senseless nonsense"... I liked that. It was a good phrase and well done.

I like the a/n. Without it I'm not sure I would've gotten that it was about instincts, but once I read that it all made so much more sense. Knowing that, the piece is really great. Especially that last stanza. It describes that gut feeling really well.

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