Reviews for Pieces from the Beginning
zeel2527 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
very good stories i really like the second one...hate that she kills herself
The Dark Swordsman chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Very well written. Cant wait to read more.
SimonClemens chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Aw, that's the end?
I was enjoying the panic racing through Dani's mind and the thought process of someone going through this, which I think you did well.
Ah well, good things don't last.
ConcreteAngelRoxHerHalo chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
I love this story with a burning passion.
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
This a really good addition to the endless glut of zombie apocalypse stories! Because even saying that, it stands out to me.
You have my attention.
Writers' Anonymous1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I REALLY enjoyed this story. I dont know if your done with this but i really hope your not. I would love to read more chapters. Great work!
Neuravinci chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Not bad-embellish the story a bit more and it could be good :)



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