Reviews for Alive
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
This is well put together... But it's a poem and not categorized as one. Also, I think you meant 12 a.m. (beginning of the day) and not 12 p.m. (middle of the day). At least I think.
Vonnie Jonah chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
It's depressing.. and yet, very real.

What I always wanted to do.. commit suicide

Keep up the good work! (: