|Reviews for Cataclysm|
| a flamer chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
that was pretty boring no offense...i only got to the end of the first paragraph...try to add a little more detail next time or sumthin
| LazeyWinde chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
*Worried voice* Was Joe Mouse all right?
I caught a few typoes that a spell checker would miss...
I really liked the symbolism/foreshadowing with the spider getting the ant.
| dawn9 chapter 1 . 7/10/2001
Poor little guy, but this was cute! Why didn't I get assignments like this when I was in school!
| Moonlit chapter 1 . 6/3/2001
Hey, i liked that one! it was really cute. Did paddywhack give you an A? Hope so!
| Black Mantis chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
I really liked your story. It describes me in class in every way possibly imaginable. I'm still debating the fact that the mouse got eaten. Does the moral of the story mean if I daydream in class that I'll get eaten by a lion? I hope not. Keep up the good work!
| Quazack chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
:Cries: That is so sad! The poor little dude! That's a good story to scare kids into paying attention in school. Nice job!