Reviews for Kiss Him, Lucy!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I want more of this!
Jess chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
I honestly love this story. And all your other work. The writing style is fantastic, and it just has...I don't know. Real life circumstances, I guess. I love how she kind of pulled to hard, so the first kiss wasn't exactly perfect. I love how she was acting like a complete nutter because she was nervous as she was serving them ice cream, and I love how Sloane wasn't your typical hot boy. All those tiny flaws, the imperfections that you infused, make the character's lovable and so much more real, rather than the Barbie doll like personalities of most of the characters of the stories on here. And somehow, even though the characters you write have their little quirks and oddities, you still manage to make it an amazingly funny and cute read. So, yeah. That's all I really wanted to say. Please write more stories soon!

And also, my favorite line has to be about her logic flying out a window into her mother's mint garden. It's just such an odd, yet endearing, line.

And now I sound like an obsessed nut.

Great.
Dreams-of-Fairies chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
BWAHAHAHAHAHA

awesome
ShadyRecords chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Arghh...your endings are always like this.

I want more lovey-dovey intoxicating stuff lol

Just kidding. You are doing the short-story ending/clip-offs correct. I mean it is a classic style. Keep it up! ]
literal.semicolon chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
lol... my sister always has some funny stuff in her favorites list! (That's LaughsWithTears, in case you might want to find something decent to read.)

Ah, how I missed you, FictionPress...
LaughsWithTears chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
LOVE it. DIED laughing. :D
balloonfista chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
LOL! Great story! Loved the last line :)

Ri

P.S. I think it's 'per se' :)
Letham chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
THIS WAS SO CUTE. That last line was great.
kaymuhray chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
LOL ! Hahaha Priceless! ( I really did laugh and ppl looked at me funny so thanks a lot) I can't believe he said that I started asking myself y did he keep goin y didn't he stop y did he kiss her again what was going through his mind during both kisses or after the first y didn't she put his pov

But then I told myself not to worry because I loved the

story and it was perfectly cute and awesome

:) 3
kaymuhray chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
LOL ! Hahaha Priceless! ( I really did laugh and ppl looked at me funny so thanks a lot) I can't believe he said that I started asking myself y did he keep goin y didn't he stop y did he kiss her again what was going through his mind during both kisses or after the first y didn't she put his pov

But then I told myself not to worry because I loved the

story and it was perfectly cute and awesome

:) 3
Sophia Kay chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Love.
AngelsXDevils chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Lololololololololololol I totally did not expect him to say that at the end!
my infectious smile chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Haha great last words...he can always teach her! Love your one shots!
Saya chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
But he came back for more. :D
SweetAbyss chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This was a great one shot! I absolutely loved the awkwardness of Lucy and the craziness of Angelica. And Sloane, we'll I may be biased since he's my type of guy, had the perfect line at the end.

Overall it was a great one shot and I'm glad I stopped to read it _

Keep up the awesome work!

~Dustbunny~