Reviews for BE003
ren360 chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
UPDATE YOU SLIMY THING!
aMyTaichoDa chapter 17 . 7/10/2012
YOU. KEEP WRITING. NAO.

No viable excuses, young woman. Put that noodle to good use(; Or else...

ψ( ω)ψ
BOB.

You've been warned.

aMyTaichoDaLovesThisStory
ren360 chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
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I think that about covers it C: I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH YOU CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO IMAGINE!

KEEP WRITING!

Ren360
jules chapter 15 . 5/17/2012
I wonder why chapter 16 got deleted. It was so good!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

You have a very interesting story here.
ren360 chapter 15 . 4/6/2012
OMG I LURVEEEEEEE ! I actually thought I might start to cry a little there! It's amazing! At frist I thought it might just be a dream but OMG i thought his mother was deaaaahdd ! rawr I hate it when they hit on him i want him for meeeh . hehehe This is a charming chapter and, I repeat, your writing has improved A LAWT! Hell, I want to take clasess form you! No seriously, promise me you'll read mine and tell me what you think? you know, crackpot writer to crackpot writer xD you know I love ya.

I love thissssssssss

KKKEEEEPPP WWWRRIITTIINGG YYOOUU!

~RENTHREESEXTEH.
ren360 chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
... Must I really speak? I think the fact that I have reviewed every singe one of these chapters and told you repeatedly this is the most intresting story I have ever read is enough!

THIS IS AMAZING! and your writing style only gets better and better, I LOVE IT! Oh, hey, im gonna be writing a story very soon in case you're interested W

TOODLES!

Oh,Iforgottosaymycatchline, ahem:

KEEP WRITING!

-Ren360
ren360 chapter 13 . 3/4/2012
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW I LOVE IT! I seriously think this might be my favorite chapter so far! It's NAWT too long, it's perfect. I like long chapters, and I LURVE THIS STORY! I loved the third person and you got me HANGING with the last part! huhuhu its practically the same thing with my mom at my house. Except for the fact she makes me write down what I did or didn't do 1000 times before I can get any other privileges. -.- yeah, dont complain, missy.

Anyway, KEEP WRITING! NOW!

Ren360
ren360 chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
... seriously? . I HATE YOU!
aMyTaichoDa chapter 12 . 2/6/2012
EHMAGAWD. I am LOVING this ;D Seriously. DONT YA EVER EVEN THINK ABOUT LEAVING THIS STORY, MISSY. Because i WILL find you.

RAAAAAWRRRR. I wanna know what happens neeexxxxtttttttt •3• upload? PLEAASEEE? For moi? You know you want to, come on ;)

Well, anyway. Doing great, honeh. CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER. So keep that pen, rollin, gorgeus ;) and see ya in a while~

~YourFriendlyNeighbor, aMyTaichoDa~
ren360 chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
Awwwwwwwrrrmmmm! :'D dammit woman you BREAK MY HEART! I loved this chapter! It seems that every chapter you get me to love this story even more!

However, there is one thing I'd like to poit out, and that's the Granatical Person it's written in. I disagree with the idea of having only ONE Narrator, and I liked that you took my advice aboutthe third person's POV. It sounds much better. However, i think it would be really interesing if Troy's POV was a separate from Esther's... If you know what i mean? ;). I don't mean to sound bossy or anything, but since i LURVE this story I Want to help you as much as i can. (wether you want it or not, alright? Good. ;))

SO KEEP WRITING YOU OL HAG.

;) and quickly.

Ren360
Nahdia chapter 12 . 2/4/2012
My only complaint is the time elapse, it just doesn't seem like she was there for two hours, I guess that's the idea but it still weirds me out, like there was an inexplicable jump in time, or like that time I got amnesia just less extreme...Other than that, I love it. It really did turn out very good.
ren360 chapter 11 . 2/4/2012
Oooooooohhh... O.O SO MYSTERIOUS! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I was both contented and disappointed at the lack of Troy info In it. Troy was just as i imagined him.

OH LORD. I NEED MOOOOREE...! Keep. Writing. .

Or else. .

Chirpy and Lively as always, here tospread haPpiness and love around the world,

Ren360
Ren360 chapter 10 . 2/4/2012
What the- you CHANGED IT? God, woman, i leave for a week and the wtory falls apart! ITS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! I like that you're continuing the story, and the new turn of events is really informative ;) are you still going by the whole Spy idea? I see you didnt take the entire thing down, which is a relief. I still havent read the next chapter BUT I SHALL! And it better be awesome ;))

As always, KEEP WRITING!

(no seriously. No back ups. ;))
Nahdia Wind chapter 11 . 1/20/2012
Very Nice, there were a few things that you need to work on though, keeping the same tense for example. Past or present it doesn't matter so long as you always use the same one.
ThisLoveThisHate14 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
From one aspiring author to another, i like this story. I think the plot is actually really original and i'd like to apoligize for not checking out your stories sooner. My school is ultra tough and i barely find the time to do anything unless it's writing another chapter or listening to music. Anyways, i hope you keep on writing and that you like the changes i made to my previous chapters.
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