| Reviews for there's something about you |
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   Commander of the Grey chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 Again, this is amazing. You have a way with words. |
| recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 11/3/2011 I really like the diction in this piece, as well as the imagery. last stanza was well-written |
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 9/19/2011 oh, very pretty! i like how your penname derives from this. |
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 9/18/2011 oh. i love the mood you've created in this piece, and it flows so well and the imagery is striking and everything about this poem is perfect. |
| Nibbles chapter 1 . 9/18/2011 The whole poem is great, but I can particularly relate to the first stanza! amazing. |
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 9/17/2011 I like the metaphor with color and that feeling of sight you get with love. This is all some exciting messy romance, love that. The depressing scene totally adds to that scary dangerous kind of love, the drugs and sex. You build addiction upon addiction and then show that even they aren't as crazy and mind-obliterating as a relationship |
| AngelOfTheLaughingHeart chapter 1 . 9/17/2011 Wow...wonderful poem! It makes me sad and smile at the same time. You did a great and very well portrayed job, take a bow. |
| smoke another grin chapter 1 . 9/16/2011 the beginning, the end, and everything in between. love. |
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 9/16/2011 I like the metaphor with color and that feeling of sight you get with love. This is all some exciting messy romance, love that. The depressing scene totally adds to that scary dangerous kind of love, the drugs and sex. You build addiction upon addiction and then show that even they aren't as crazy and mind-obliterating as a relationship |
| Dux Interitio chapter 1 . 9/16/2011 When the poem started my first thought went to abuse where often the abused feels they deserve the abuse and they look better to the abuser and thus all others when they are submissive, "that i'm prettier on my knees." I'ts a very visual poem I think. I also like the last stanza and how it is comparing the speaker's visions on drugs v.s. how she sees sober. |
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 'you've said my name four times in your sleep,/ wrapped in blue cotton layers, your breathing heavy -/ yet just as faint as i was when you rescued me.' amazing. i completely and utterly adore this poem. :) |
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 oh my god, i love this. from the first stanza - "i can't help but think that i'm prettier on my knees." - i can't even tell you. i don't mean to gush, but i really do love this. |
| Young King101 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 The imagery is perfect and the ending about "colour" is great. I especially felt the emotion and personality in the last line "and oh god, the way you look at me", that's pretty awesome. |
| thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 lalalove this to pieces.. can't wait to read more from you :) |
| Process-Of-Dying chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 Thanks for the review. Yeah when I uploaded my stuff the stanzas were fine but when I look at them on my comp none of them are seperated right. Really irritating to be truthful. But on my cell like I am now they look like they are supposed to. O well... Anyway I really like this dark and gritty and raw |