Reviews for First Try
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
awww:) that was cute and well written, i love how laurie interrupts them!
S.H. Marr chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I'd love to read about the second try, if you intend to write that. I'm not sure how feel about stuff like that.

It's really cute.

~S
Plaid Chad chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
This. Is. So. Cute! AAhh You really had me hating Zaire for a while, but I guess he isn't too bad after all. Are you going to write their second date? I would love to read that! Oh my goodness Derek is my favorite. He's so nice! I think a scene with Ace and Zaire meeting would also be nice. Maybe Derek could invite Zaire over for dinner, or something such as? Oh my. I wonder how the Niroshimas would like Zaire. I bet they would. I like him a lot. Derek might get a litle jealous when Tomas walked in though! Oh man. We know Zaire likes Spanish boys ;)

But anyway, yeah! This story is quite good and I thouroughly enjoyed reading it.

~Emily