Reviews for lolita
the way you look at me chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
So tragically beautifully. The last lines are perfect and you have such a great way with details - you painted the picture just right.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Really nice piece. The language you used was nice, though this isn't suitable for the rating K, just thought I'd tell you that.

I didn't know what a lolita was, so I had to google that so I could fully understand what you're trying to convey. I mean, I got the drift of what you were saying...but I like that use of terminology beyond what someone would generally know.

Really liked those last two lines.