Reviews for The time has come
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 2 . 11/16/2011
Good job, Erin! Just one thing though, it looks like your formatting didn't take or something...
Thewise chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
Interesting. It might help to space things out a bit more. For instance, every time someone speaks enter. If you break up the paragraph a little bit it's easier on the eyes. Good story so far, keep it up!