Reviews for Escaping The Claws
LuckycoolHawk9 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I liked how you caught the mind of a mouse because the story wouldn't be interesting if you told it and it would be generic. I also like how the mouse knows he has to thank the girl because he was saved by her from certain death and is in her debt. this review is for the Review marathon(link in my profile)
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
My heart skips a beat after reading the ending

I can't think of anything to say it's just hit transportng me into it

With every vivid word it just hooks me deeper into this

Ah ma zz _&