Reviews for the unarmed prophet
Ravenlady333 chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
This review will be for both of the chapters uploaded so far. The quotations you have in the beginning of each chapter are wonderful and really sets a good tone. Your style of writing is getting pretty honed in and anyone with some English background would be able to tell that, so good job. The only thing more I would ask from you on the whole is your style of speech. When the characters talk and then subsequently think it just feels off. A smoother transition would do you a world of good for the entirety of the story however and make it easier to really get into. I look forward to more of the coming chapters from your story. What you have so far is extremely well written. Keep up the good work please!
bebob chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
fascinating. would love to see more.
Megan Ariano chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
genius. i'll read more when you update. :)