This review will be for both of the chapters uploaded so far. The quotations you have in the beginning of each chapter are wonderful and really sets a good tone. Your style of writing is getting pretty honed in and anyone with some English background would be able to tell that, so good job. The only thing more I would ask from you on the whole is your style of speech. When the characters talk and then subsequently think it just feels off. A smoother transition would do you a world of good for the entirety of the story however and make it easier to really get into. I look forward to more of the coming chapters from your story. What you have so far is extremely well written. Keep up the good work please!

fascinating. would love to see more.

genius. i'll read more when you update. :)