Reviews for Hero Complex
BonnesParoles chapter 6 . 7/27
As petty as this may seem, I don't think I can continue reading this only because she keeps calling her mother, "Mommy." I CAN'T.
Aria Deloncray chapter 18 . 7/12
Great story!
Gladys Baya chapter 18 . 7/7
I liked the story; I shed tears few times in between the reading; the story rolls smoothly; thanks very much looking forward to read about Drew and Laney.
Zippy424 chapter 18 . 6/2
Naww I love this story. It is so sweet. Thank you so much for sharing it!
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 3/15
"...Drew invited me to the White House..." Shouldn't this be "Johnny"?

I'm enjoying reading your story again. Actually, I think that this is my third re-read.
MissLoremasterSarah chapter 2 . 3/7
The whole "Mommy" thing is just bugging me out right now. But WHATEVS.
MissLoremasterSarah chapter 1 . 3/7
I'll be reading :-)

A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 18 . 12/16/2014
Loved it. And just stayed up extremely late to finish it! (It's 2.45am oops) Can't wait to see what else you've got in your repertoire!
Princess Wanderer chapter 18 . 12/15/2014
I want more about Drew and Laney!
xCrazykindofWeirdx chapter 18 . 9/19/2014
Colie Rae chapter 18 . 9/14/2014
Love the story! I love the build up, the awkward moments, the uncertainty and all the misunderstandings. It was so realistic and so honest and the characters were so genuine and likable. I think that Alana's character was not quite age appropriate. For being only 4 she spoke like an immature 10 year old. Her character was obviously important but I think altering her dialogue a little bit would do wonders for her character. The plot was awesome. I loved how everyone was rooting for them. Excellent job!
Raychin chapter 18 . 7/17/2014
Aww, so perfect!
lily.dragneel chapter 18 . 5/31/2014
OMG OMG OMG i knew it!Drew and Laney FTW!i need to read that!
so about the main's a verry cute story, and i can affirm tha i didn't get bored reading evry little chapter of it!
johnny is an awsome character who made me wish people like him existed in real life!
i adored mimi's personality! so no cliché! so unique!so crazy!
i loved he bound with her friends and mom! it was just too beatifull!
i loved laney too, with her drama queen act!and how she acted like a mom sometimes! and how she cared for her friends! and her arguments with drew too! like an ild married couple!(soo cute 3)
and of corse,i loved drew too!because despite the looks he cared for is friends(especially when he threatened to kill johnny owwwww )and i'll say it straight : i ship him with laney!
soo thank you for coming up with such a beautiful story and wonderfull caracters!
oh and sorry for my too_long review!
Booklovingteen chapter 7 . 5/20/2014
Yes Sarah dessen reference yes it's still me
Booklivingteen chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
Ok girl I feel like you know me just cud ur character is like super close to me we have the same name and even the same nicknames #mirkat plus I'm a vegetarian too
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