|Reviews for Hero Complex|
| Brightheart chapter 18 . 10/31/2011
amazing. loved it a lot. want a side story.
| a little girl chapter 18 . 10/29/2011
WOW! I haven't read any good stories in FP for quite a while until yours :) I like the way you write :) It's awesome! :)
| Jenny chapter 18 . 10/25/2011
Oh my gosh, this was an amazing story. I cried with Miri and laughed with her, too. So glad everything worked out for them! AHHH!ENGAGEDDD! you should do a sequel(:
| choco-rose chapter 18 . 10/22/2011
Second time reading this story and I'm still smileing and squealing though thewhole thing xD
| Cindy Marie chapter 18 . 10/22/2011
this was really good. I loved it:)
| realle time chapter 18 . 10/19/2011
this is just so awesome
| realle time chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
that is carrie by stephen king isnt it :) i love how you smilfied and interfrated it
| witeaya chapter 18 . 10/17/2011
ah, a great read.
| witeaya chapter 8 . 10/16/2011
had fun reading ur story so far.
| SmilingSarcasm chapter 18 . 10/15/2011
It was great, I love all the art and music thrown into it. I also liked how she and her mother had a great relationship, it was amazingly cool, lol
| Katie chapter 18 . 10/13/2011
i absolutely loved this! i love how you didnt just automatically have them get together after the kiss and then just have a whole bunch of fluff. KEEP WRITING STUFF LIKE THIS!
| leavesfallingup chapter 18 . 10/5/2011
Thank you for sharing this well-written, beautiful story. I hope that you will continue to write many more stories in the future.
One correction: "But an entire country thinks I I'm good enough for her" You have one too many I's in the midle of this sentence.
| leavesfallingup chapter 17 . 10/5/2011
Miri may heal, but she'll probably have problems later in life due to two traumatic injuries to the same area.
But at least the truth came out and the issue between her and Johnnie was resolved.
His confession was well handled and very touching. Using the painting as the catalyst for reconciliation was a nice touch.
| leavesfallingup chapter 14 . 10/5/2011
Why do I have the feeling that there is more to the story behind Johnny's "misunderstanding" than meets the eye? Probably because jamaninja is a devious author who loves to torture both the characters and the readers.
Okay, must read on!
| leavesfallingup chapter 13 . 10/5/2011
Being a bodyguard or Secret Service Protection Detail would be very difficult. Sometimes you would have to stand by and watch one of your young protectees doing something really stupid but you would have to stand by and say nothing.
If this were real, I would feel sorry for Tyrone. He clearly likes Miri as a person, yet he had to remain silent while Johnny made a fool of her, and himself. At least, that is what I assume is happening at this point in the story.