Hilarious Chapter! Love it :)

Grr! Karrine deserves to DIE, not because she broke Johnny's feelings (maybe partially), but because Johnny still loves her!
Enjoying the Story so far! :)

Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;)

Johnny has to give Miriam the Ring later! It would be oh so Romantic...
Johnny & Alana's Relationship is so cute and so is Miriam & Alana's! :)

Ha. Loved this Chapter! :)

First of all, her teachers' reactions were priceless,especially the one mentioning pot. Secondly, ohhh Mario, you hilarious man. Thirdly, of course there would be a gorgeous ex. Of course.

Oh my word... When I read the first Barbara Manatee thing, I just about hyperventilated with my laughing.

Love! Absolutely fantastic!

This is such a cute and fabulous story! Of course it was 't that realistic, but your writing and the believabiltiy of the characters (is that even a thing) made it seem almost normal! I love Miri and Johnny's relationship! Perfect story! I only wish it was a little longer, haha :) great job!

Such a cute story! Definitely a very strong unique storyline...

yay this seems good. sjdfsd totally cute. kay i will review more later on. BRING ON ROMANCE

I am usually fairly hard to impress with literature...much less evoke actual emotional responses from with said literature. That being said, I am very impressed with this piece as it not only flowed nicely throughout the story but actually made me happy, sad, angry, furious, humorous, and even brought me close to tears in all the right places. If you asked anyone that knew me, they'd all tell you that I was about the equivalent of a super-genius, close-to-emotionless robot of an Irishman that is somehow the kindest person they know and that I have a hero complex of my own (their words, not mine)...so tears aren't normal for me. But this piece is a true work of art that made me laugh along with the characters as well as cry with them. (I hope none of my friends see that last part though, lol.) The only thing that I really saw that was wrong with it is it needs a proofreading edit in some parts as the names got confused a bit in one or two paragraphs here and there. Other than that, this would also make a superb movie if it were followed and done properly. Great job! I hope to read more on this story as well as others.

Loved it! Big Time!

Well...that was one twisted bedtime story XD

Omg amazing story so cute!