|Reviews for Hero Complex|
| My life is not fair chapter 18 . 4/27/2013
This... This is amazing. I love it. It just... It brought tears to my eyes when I read it. It is an absolutley goergeous story. I love it
| Lullay chapter 18 . 4/17/2013
I have been hesitating about reading this story for a long long long time but...waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ! It was perfect !
| Minkaos chapter 18 . 4/1/2013
Wow, I really enjoyed reading your story! Your characters are likeable and funny and so adorable. Miri and Johnny are so cute together that I can't even contain myself, haha. I really love how Miri is so selfless and so loving of her friends and family.
| maiff chapter 18 . 3/25/2013
Huhuhu why are they so adorable? Asdfghjkl; I love this story. Keep up the good work! :3
| Wiplash11 chapter 18 . 3/23/2013
| HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 18 . 3/5/2013
Awwww! I love this story! Eek! Very cute!
| Can't remember chapter 18 . 3/5/2013
Well... I just... That was just soooooo UNBILEVIABLE! Very thing was just so perfect! HOW THE HELL DID YOU MAKE IT SOOOOO...SPECTACULAR?
GAHH, I just loved it! It was so much fun to read. And I'd read it again and again and again and ya know...again.
IT GOING INTO MY FAVOURITES!
| GreenPandaOfDoom chapter 18 . 3/2/2013
An amazing story. You have my total respect for writing this. I love all the characters and felt myself falling for johnny constantly. I found myself always laughing or smiling or even crying like an idiot when ever I read this. Thank you so much for writing this. You are a brilliant writer
| petal romance chapter 18 . 2/16/2013
loved this story so much that i added it as favorites. two words-splendid work :D
| BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 18 . 2/6/2013
This story is so beautiful! I was about to cry in the last few chapters. I still have watery eyes. I just want to say that this is one of the best romance stories I have read on this website. You did a good job!
| B chapter 18 . 2/4/2013
Such a good story. :) Love it!
Least favorite part: There really wasn't a least favorite part, but something I thought that you kind of skipped of was the fact that Miri promised Alana that she would visit over the break, but she never did. If you published this book, then you might want to add that in there,
BUT! Dun dun duhhh!
Favorite part: The best part, for me, was the scene that made me laugh the most...Which happened to be... Drew (at least, i think it was him (probably was Laney)) said that Johnny and Miri were going to get married, have kids, he was going to become president, AND MIRI WAS GOING TO PAINT THE WHITE HOUSE BLUE!
Lol. Yeah. I am sure I died.
Anyway! Thanks for the story! But thanks to you, I am behind on my school. *Makes a face* Oh well, I would rather do school then get hit with a moving vehicle, if you catch my drift.
Oh yeah! I was expecting Johnny to snap and come at Miri, touching her neck so that she was forced to listen to him. SO, bravo! The car was reallllly unexpected!
| petal romance chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
i love your style. completly enjoyed the work
| displacedfemale chapter 18 . 1/29/2013
Firstly I want to apologise for not reviewing every chapter as I read it but figured that you'd maybe not be thrilled to find your inbox filled with reviews from the same person.
Now onto the review...
This was so cute! I loved the characters and the value they brought to the story, sometimes people have all these characters who add nothing to the story but I didn't find that with Hero Complex.
I loved the way you wrote the First Family (being British I'm not sure if that needs capitals or not so...) and the way that the kids had become so close as a result of the stress and distraction of being President and First Lady. The way you wrote Alana was adorable and her interaction with Miri was super cute and touching, there are so many kids who are sidelined in reality due to their parents jobs and that's not always intentional or totally detrimental but I felt that the way you wrote it was quite true to reality in that sense.
The insecurity Miri felt when introduced to Johnny's world was great too, it's refreshing to read something in which two totally different worlds do not meet and merge seamlessly.
I loved Hero Complex for so many reasons, the twists, the relationships, the turns, the close shaves and the crazily intense romantic bust-ups. Thanks for sharing :)
| Snow White's Dream chapter 18 . 1/27/2013
Wow. Just wow. There are like no words to express this whole fan-girl, all-nighter, hysterical behavior I had going for the past few hours due to this. I mean, At first I was like, okay, not very likely but pretty entertaining. Just, the banter. The humour. It's all so... Ugh there isn't even a word. I SHIP THEE.
So, needless to say, I approve :)
| Lapin chapter 13 . 1/13/2013
He's being such a jerk! GAH! Stupid boys...