Reviews for Bleed Like Me
arrhythmias chapter 4 . 9/15/2011
oh my god. this one. THIS one. it just - gah. it reminds me of me. there shouldn't be anything wrong with me, but there is. asdjkfa.

Ending of Forever chapter 5 . 9/13/2011
Dang man...that seriously depressed me.
Time To Change chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
I'm curious who all these girls are. It'd be interesting if fp let you add pictures to your work. I'd like to see you paint whirlpools and tornadoes.

And whoop. I have reviewed all the chapters. Because you asked so nicely (:
Time To Change chapter 3 . 7/26/2011
I think nicotine's spelt with an i, but I'm not sure, and spellings vary from country to country anyway. This is quite a blunt piece, but I think that packs emotional punch.
Time To Change chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
It would be interesting to see Brittany Currington's opinion of her transformation. But I can relate to this in the sense of having friends who change, and not liking what's happening to them one bit.

I love the last line. Poetic.
Time To Change chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Do people have to be weird to have alcoholic or suicidal relatives?

I like how your pieces often come across as angry, yet reflective. Don't know if that's the atmosphere/tone you were going for but that's what I feel.
Ending of Forever chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
Wow. This was amazing. Please continue.