Reviews for Give Me a Mic and I'll Shine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute story! Thanks for sharing it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hgbpiugqew; ,MDWEPO'QFHGNVECDSLAMCDW32f SORRY! I fell on my laptop after I lost conscienceness from the awesomeness that is this story. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute lol. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I turnd to mush at the photo scenes. Mush I tell you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooooo getting spicy. Loved, loved, loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so I am already attracted to Cole's character. Soooo my type. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I CANNOT BELIEVE I MISSED THIS STORY! Shame on me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay an update! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome lol I'm so excited for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending!Can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like your story so far,really interesting plot! Update sooon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was fun. :) I liked the dialogue in particular - it feels really natural. If you'd like a critique, I would've liked to have seen a smidge more detail in the narration. Try to show a bit more, instead of telling. That said, I really like the premise and I'll definitely keep an eye on this. |