|Reviews for My Secret To Bare|
| the one who hums chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
This is really good so far! I got nervous in chapter one that Clara had killed him, but it was justa tranq gun. By the way, who walks around a campground carrying one of those? Strange... So did her dad die out over in those woods too? Or was the 'first her father' comment referring to being eaten by a wolf? So many questions...Please update soon!
| DanielStalwart chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
sorry to gripe about the name but tuski gonzalez? is he part japanese and part latino?
You have quite a number or sudden sentence breakups. Try to link up your sentences more. Too much short sentences can be really annoying a times
the last part where the girl exclaims with the sarcasm. I don't think this is the right emotion and feeling to the scene. Unless her profession is to hunt werewolves, a normal human being would definitely be scared out of their wits when confronted by creatures like werewolves
| Bel Lovelock chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I like how the first chapter does not come on strong. Love this light chapter 1, and I must say I'm getting a little hooked. Keep writing.