|Reviews for Sweet Surrender BoyxBoy|
| Krystell B.Z chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Pretty short for the first chapter but I liked it. A little jumpy too, but I'm sure I'm gonna have fun reading this and getting to know the characters
| YilmasRegin chapter 20 . 5/26/2013
First off, extremely good job to both of you. This has deffinetly secured a top 3 position of all the stories I've read, here on FictionPress.
After having read Heartless first, thinking that it was actually pretty good. Even the bit of smut that it included. It was quite nice to see how you have grown as an author, with your work here in Sweet Surrender.
Now of cause, part of that is that you had a co-writer on hand here. But still. The depth of the story, but also the characters is truly breathtaking.
I really love the this 3rd person writing style, especially in story such as this. As it usually lets you commit a lot more time to the details, feelings and the plot.
I would have loved to see an actual sex scene, however I saw that there was a sequel to this, so I'm guessing I might find something there, but I'll just have to wait and see.
Also great job with the length of each chapter. This is a very rare thing here on FictionPress. And I must admit, that you forget about time a lot easier when you dont have to constantly change chapter.
Overall, love the story. Now it's onwards to the sequel. Hope it is as good as this.
| Rokuchuchu chapter 8 . 1/26/2013
I think now is a good time to really start WTF-ing.. heheu
I really wonder how 1. you only have 31 reviews and 2. you presevered through these very long chapters with only 31 reviews.. I don't know about fictionpress because I'm on fanfiction a lot more, but I would have given up by then, I really look up to you two.
Good work, your grammar and writing si wonderful, thank you for the good read so far, I'll review again soon!
Slash fics are the best!
| Emoness chapter 20 . 12/20/2012
this beautiful amazingly wonderful story is finished?
...I'm going to miss this story.
Tank you for sharing it with my world it is amazing
| Love U Te chapter 14 . 11/17/2012
Still trying to figure out why this story only has 29 reviews when this honestly derserves a little more than that. i Absolutely luvvv it 3
| theStarfly chapter 20 . 10/20/2012
This was a great story, story wise, but I have a couple pointers.
You seem to mix up your and you're quite a bit, and you seem to have a few things that were just left hanging, but otherwise I enjoyed this!
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 20 . 10/16/2012
I'm sad to see this story finally ending. I feel like I've been reading it forever and that now that it's over, I lost a friend or something. I live the way that it ended though I had hoped Ellen would get over herself and apologize to Varian and Nathan and Venerra.
I've been with this story since the beginning and I just can't wait to see what you end up writing next. Thanx so much for sticking with and finishing it. I loved every moment and I hope to continue reading your stories! Thanx again, bye!
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 18 . 10/10/2012
Sorry I don't have time to leave a really long review but I absolutely love this chapter. Even if I was kinda serious, it mostly had a light feel to it since Nathan and Varian have talked about most of their serious issues. I wonder if what Varian was getting at with the blood drinking talk was that it might fix his impotence by letting him borrow Nathan's feelings while feeding.
And I love Justin, even if he has to learn to stop being nosy about private things. And I'm glad that Nathan and Varian are comfortable about their relationship now to not mind that much when Justin does find stuff out. Also, I can't wait to see what Millie tells Nathan since she said soon and that it's important. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Thanx so much, bye!
| myheart4you chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Well, it kind of reminded me of the "twilight shit",but honestly, thats okay. I know of plenty of people who liked the books before they were turned into movies.
Anyway. This was really well written, and i enjoyed it :)
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 17 . 9/17/2012
I am so sorry it took me so long to review this! At the end of the year I had so many exams and then I had to move and do all the stuff for my new college, I'm just getting the chance to go through stories and read updates.
I absolutely love this chapter. I didn't expect Varian to show all his memories to Nathan like that. But I do think it really helped both move forward, Varian letting go of his past and Nathan fully understanding what exactly Varian's life was like. I know they talk about it a lot, but I don't think Nathan knew what effect everything had on Varian until that. And I love how much they understand each other now that they talked about everything. I hope that they can finally start being happier.
But I really want to know what Millie's ulterior motive is! I wonder if it does have something to do with Nathan's dad. He is still such a mystery and I'm starting to wonder what exactly happened to him and how he died(if he died). I don't want anything bad to happen though and I wonder if Elle kept everything from him for more than just herself. I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Thanx so much, bye!
| Angelxoxo13 chapter 16 . 1/7/2012
I loove this story! Update soon please. :)
| Emoness chapter 16 . 12/12/2011
my favourite chapter by far.
Amazing, lovely and awww inspiring :)
can't wait for more!
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 16 . 12/11/2011
Okay i officially love Nathan. He is the most understanding, sweet, caring, perfect guy to have as a boyfriend. I love that he is always able to find the right thing to say to comfort Varian and make him realize that he won't leave him so easily. And it is so perfect the way that he is able to understand what is going through Varian's head and help him figure things out. I'm soo glad that they are finally mates! I never really expected it to happen in this chapter though i am so happy it did. They both deserve something good to happen for them after all the crap they've been through recently.
I adore Justin and fully agree with him about his sister being a wtying for tying Nathan up and kissing him. I'm so glad though that both Andrea and Justin took finding out so well, so that Nathan and Vsrian wouldn't lose their friends. I'm glad that Evan finally got a boyfriend of his own so he can get off Varian and be happy. I really want to know what's up with Jecklynn and Helen though. I mean, both Nathan and Venerra get bad feelings around them and Jecklynn still hasn't left Varian alone. And how the heck would she know who Nathan is? Cuz o doubt Venerra or Jecklynn would mention him to her. I really hope that those two don't do sometbing to mess up Varian and Nathan's relationship when they've barely been together for a while. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Thanx, bye!
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 15 . 12/11/2011
I can't believe that Millie knows something about Nathan's past and isn't telling him. And does her motive for letting him work for her have to do with him finding something out about his dad? I can't wait to see what Nathan's reaction will be once Varian tells him Millie is holding info from him. And i wonder if Millie is going to tell Nathan's mom that Varian and Nathan are dating since she does call her sister and talk about Nathan. And why does Eric seem to know stuff too when he wasn't even there when Nathan's dad was around.
I'm sooo anxious to see what happens now that Andrea knows that Varian and Nathan are together and Varian used his power against her. Is she going to tell Justin and the school about it? Is she did then she would have to say that she was practically going to jump Nathan against his will though... And what's the deal with the students saying all that crap about them? They weren't even doing anything to give them away as a couple. The people at that school seriously need to learn to mind their own business. And i'm really curious about Varian's disorder where he's now impotent. I mean, he's never acted like that all the times he made out with Nathan. I bet that Nathan will just have to help him get over that little problem. Can't wait for more, bye!
| kunf'you'z-ed chapter 14 . 12/11/2011
Oh wow, i didn't expect Nathan's mom to act like that when Nathan finally questioned her. I wonder what she could be hiding about how his dad died and why she was trying to keep everything about Mortals from him. And i really feel bad for Varian now that we finally found out about everything that happened in his past. I can't believe that his parents just left like that, didn't even take anything. It almost seems like they were expecting something like that to happen between him and Grant. They didn't even seem shocked that he was practically raped! I really hope they never show back up, they don't deserve kids as good as Venerra and Varian. And i can't believe that Grant just left him like that when he obviously didn't know what happened either.
I'm so happy that Nathan and Varian have officially become a couple. And i'm soo proud that Nathan doesn't even care what other people think and won't let them get in the way of his relationship with Varian. I love the way that they acted out against all those idiots at the zoo. They should just be left alone, they weren't doing anything wrong. And i love the ice cream guy! He has to be the coolest person with the way that he didn't judge Varian and Nathan and and even seemed happy for them. I can't wait to see how the people at their school will react especially that Jecklynn chick and Andrea, both who are obviously crushing on our main guys. And i wonder what Justin will think of his new friend dating his best friend, who hated the new guy at the beginning. Thanx, bye!