This chapter was more drama filled I guess. Not one of my favourite chapters; but all for the plot I guess.

The ending to this chapter with Dr. Nhik kissing Varian who was and Is unconscious was rather interesting If I must say. I'm excited to see what happens next! My favourite parts in this chapter is this conversation which gave me a good chuckle:
Justin: "... If I say something with you yell at me again?"
Varian: "No."
Justin: "Good. Because you sir, look like absolute hell."
This was just hilarious! I also like the smart comment afterwards about Varian asking if he meant 'Technically or actually?'
My other favorite part was this one:
Andrea: "What are we talking about?"
Justin: "Nathan's sex life."
Then how Nathan kicked Justin under the table making Justin correct himself next saying;
"Right, sorry- His lack of one."
That was perfect! XDDDDD
My last but least favourite was Nathan's statement about Justin to Varian.
Nathan: "First off- you look like s*hit. Generally when people look like s*hit, they don't go to school. Second- You told Justin about...Almost everything? Why Justin? I mean...He's Justin! That's not really the point right now, but for future reference...He's Justin!"
This was soooooo unexpected! Hahahaha! Loved this chappie like every-one so far!

I loved the joke about how Varian and Nathans' size difference is like a slap across the face; that was funny when reading out of nowhere. I also find Nathan's anxiety level rather relatable going by how when making the sauce he accidently added extras without meaning to, while in attempt to play it off. There were a few errors like when Justin came back claiming that he had gotten 'rudely interrupted' when in reality he was the one that actually excused himself from the table by going into the lunch-line, leaving Nathan with Andrea alone. And how at the ending Nathan didn't defend Varian on the Auntie accusing Varian of not being mature to drop him back off; meaning Varian in reality is getting false blame. In the overall though; the book is really good!

This chapter was so funny! I love how Nathan and Varian had an element battle! It felt as if I were there watching and cheering from the sidelines. I also love the details between the two boys' relationship in occurring bond together like; how Nathan was up against Varian when riding Cana. And how Varian was blushing and leaned in close to Nathan. As well as; towering over him from where he remained stuck in the mud. It's also funny how dramatic Justin was when he walked into the classroom at the start of the chapter, only to find out that it was only about academic stuff XD I also like the fun fact about how Varian claims that leaving Nathans' car unlocked while also taking his valuables out of his car is rather interesting to think about in order to protect windows from being smashed. My favourite conversation in the book was this part though:
Nathan: "I get car sick very easily. Fair warning."
Varian: "Then I suppose you deserve a fair warning that I'm horrible at small talk."
Nathan: "Feel free to ignore my commentary then."
Varian: "On the contrary, I like to listen to your commentary. You never say more then you need to."
Nathan: "Trust me, you'll get annoyed very quickly."
(This was just so life-like, especially their bond together. It gave me a good laugh.)

This book is so gooooooodddddd! I'm actually addicted! The humor is really funny! Especially the parts like; "Uh-huh. Less than happy about it. Apparently he's a magnet for boxes" Got me laughing so hard! Like wow! XD My other favorite part was; "Boy got distracted every 5-minutes. Started swearing at my products like there was no tomorrow. So I told him to take a break." This was just hilarious! I love the bond that all the characters have with eachother; each and every-one is unique and special in its own way. Nathan and Varian is more of an adventure, mysterious based. The two twins are more annoying friends that are relatable to the earth worlds' environment. The aunt is funny and awesome towards the plot and how she has as major part in the plot on Nathans' life and Varian's' income.

This chapter was really interesting; especially now that the 'changed' topic has been explained into deeper in-depth. I also love how the boys are all rather flirtatious; it brings a kinky sort of vibe to the plot and storyline. Along with drama, entertainment, and arousal to the readers in the fourth wall. My favorite part was the joke at the end of this chapter quote unquote: "And you can't be hallucinating if you feel physical sensations" That made me chuckle and feel the side-dish of embarrassment from Nathan through to me knowing how his second head is probably feeling to him being exposed like that.

This book is so good! I love the humor and characters' personalities in this! The plot has been written very well; especially how everything lines up with one-another. The punctuation is amazing! The books' objective is very entertaining making me want to continue reading. I'm very pleased with 'Sweet surrender BoyxBoy' so far!

I love how both twins were annoying the two characters that'll end up together. I find this book to be very well written and very punctual in details and clearness. I'm really enjoying it so far; and am thrilled to continue reading! The realism in how the Vampire and schoolboy behave is done perfectly! Awesome book so far; enjoying it very much, along with the fun facts about Marine biology too!

I rather enjoyed this chapter so far. At first I got confused between which character is which, since everything passed by so fast. But after one character mentioned about not scaring the humans; that was when I caught on. I find it very fascinating how the fourth wall can see the perspectives of first and second pov at the same time. Since it brings out more realism to real life on how other people see different events that occur at the same time as the person who had caused that said event.

So this was a lot longer and a lot of it seemed unnecessary. Why hasn't Varian and Nathan even seen each other yet? Aren't they the main characters?

Yes, it did go 'well'. You say this is a long chapter? It's not very long, I like that. I prefer chapters to be smaller-ish. There's more chances for me to give feedback 3:) I'll keep reading!

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There are no words to express how I feel about this story. :3

(Plus since mind is total flump right now, nothing in particular comes to mind.) :P

I don't understand why people thought it was a good idea to let a disturbed eleven year old take charge of a baby. And a farm.

So beautiful, one of the most enchanting stories I've read. It'll be running through my head for weeks.