Reviews for The Chosen Ones
drown in my desire chapter 15 . 7/25/2013
that was good :) chris is an idiot though.

update soon?
drown in my desire chapter 14 . 7/25/2013
aw, that was really sad.

wow it's been a while since i read any of your stories :P
drown in my desire chapter 13 . 11/23/2011
So is Chris the other prince?

Lissy's not doing a very good job of being Val. James is getting suspicious... :)

It's sweet to see how much Aaron and Val care about each other, but Aaron can stop being such a dick about it.
drown in my desire chapter 12 . 11/23/2011
You know what, Chris is really stupid, too. But O. M. G. Val and Aaron are totally made for each other! And I really like Warren :)
drown in my desire chapter 11 . 11/23/2011
Scott is SO stupid.

Val is growing on me. She's fast becoming my favorite character.
drown in my desire chapter 10 . 11/23/2011
The chapters ARE very long, I'll give you that. XD

So NOW Val and Lissy see the flaw in their plans.
waitingForRand chapter 13 . 11/21/2011
Nooooooooooooo...

Val will be soo angry when she gets up... if I were her.. i would bring him back to life just so I can kill him again... whats with the death wish...

I cant wait to hear that he is alright... he has to be...He can take my green light...
hehehaha94 chapter 13 . 11/21/2011
i hope they both get to live somehow. :) keep writing
waitingForRand chapter 12 . 11/19/2011
I am so worried about Aaron... I like him... and val too... Lissy not so much...Is this really complete or you are gonna work on it more...

Ok - So I liked the story. An honest opinion? I dint like it as much as your stories on FF. Probably because its soo short. Need more descriptions I think and Aaron and that dupe Aaron(which i think is Chris) was very confusing.

And its just that Chris accepted Val so easily as Lissy and same with Scott... especially because their powers are so different from each other.

I like Aaron*blushes* I hope he doesn't die... Have a good weekend.
hehehaha94 chapter 12 . 11/16/2011
Is Aaron going to die? I hope not... I love how the story is progessing though.. keep writing )
hehehaha94 chapter 11 . 11/11/2011
I hope Aaron doesn't die ) keep writing i can't wait to see what happens next
hehehaha94 chapter 10 . 11/4/2011
I liked this chapter too! ) i like the last one and i liked this one too.. Aaron is so sweet its nice to see the softer side of him
drown in my desire chapter 9 . 11/2/2011
Oh, naïve Alex...
drown in my desire chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
Haha, no problem xD but it was a very good chapter :)
drown in my desire chapter 7 . 11/2/2011
Give in to your desires, Valerie dear :)
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