Reviews for A Winter Story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
Hilarious! Loved it :)
LiexTruth chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Hahaa Loved the ending :D
Grey Ghostwritter chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
I loved it from beginning to end. Shine isn't the only one with a thing for dominance ;)
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Hahaha! "I'm a professional chef" put the perfect spin on the end. _
LikeAppleLove chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This was soooo sweet!
Northfacegrl5 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
LMFAO!
missmarymacintosh chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This was fantastic and very very cute, I enjoyed reading it immensely.
IWriteWhatIFeel27 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Awwww, how cute! It was so fluffy and I like was so amazing and your wording-great! Great humor too. Keep it up!
MindaAnn chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Very very cute. I was laughing outpouring in public looking crazy reading this. Thanks, I needed it.
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
haha ! i wonder what happened after that ! and you're right ;) confidence is SUCH a turn on
Whatsoever chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
*Mirror shattering squeal* So cute :D
critic chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
this is such a cute one shot. Dude, she kicks ass with cucumbers! I need to take a lesson from her some day...
dragonluver62897 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Hilarious and loving! Can't stop smiling!
noveltybee chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I want more from Shine & Cloud! D:

That was extremely cute of Cloud, in a weird, stalker kind of way. Lol

Your writing makes me green. (sigh)
Vicky A chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
HAHA, I loved the one-shot. It was very original and funny :)
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