Wow! This is a great piece! I like the alternate universe that you've created here. I do wonder-are Skilled people kept secret from the population at large? It seems that way, based on Lee's past. Yet the community itself seems so out in the open.
I really like Ellie-she's kind of badass in her quiet sort of way. Her progressing relationship with Jax and Lee are also intriguing.
I hope you find time to work on this soon!

I read this story in one go, I was so enthralled! I love the mystery, the anticipation of henry's next move, and it helps that Ellie's pretty awesome! Plus, kudos for Jax; the chemistry between him and Ellie is amazing, and I was so sure that she would end up with Lee that I was pretty much taken by surprise by this turn of events (by the way, I'm totally rooting for Jax)!

All that to say I adore this story and can't understand why there isn't any more reviews, and please, please update soon!

Yayyyyyy! I'm so happy! More more more :) I love Ellie!

Hey, I'm loving this, can't wait for more :-)

More and more questions!

I'm still wondering why Lee was avoiding Ellie.

What just happened with her mind and Jax's? Why did it happen?

What's Henry currently up to? This might sound bizarre but, he didn't manipulate Jax right? Or Lee didn't manipulate Jax right?

I'm glad you updated, this story is really interesting. Good luck on your editing. I hope in future that you add more skills, cause those are fun, and maybe a nice bit about what Jaz's room is like so I can imagine myself snuggled in it? Aha ;)

Omg. What an amazing chapter! Well worth the wait, although I haveto say it stuck with me! Everytime I checked my email I hoped for an update! More soon please

hey awesome story. I know you don't have that many reviews for this story, but it deserves at least 4 times as much as it's getting now. Keep up the good work!

Oh wow, I honestly expected she'd be getting closer to Lee but it seems Jax and his awesomeness is winning out.

I really do wonder what Lee's deal is.

This is sooooo good! Every time I check my mail I hope there's a new chapter from you! I'm so sorry you're stuck! Usually what I do is take. Break and do some planning. Usually, I know a few main ideas in the timeline and have trouble getting to each one. Maybe try sitting down with a pen and paper and mapping out the rest of your story, where you want it to go. Usually that gives me some ideas.

What's up with Lee? Maybe you can write about that :) or that party... ;)

Awesome! More please! :D

XD Yay she quickly apologised to Lee but now it's Lee who's running away...I wonder what Lee's story is...

but wow D; Jax grew up in a really harsh environment. He seems to be a really decent guy though

Ellie seems really powerful too, her family is talented too :O

The story development is really good D Can't wait to see what happens next. (Sorry about the horrible grammar and punctuation. Essays are driving me crazy.)

Oh dear. I wonder how Jax would respond if he knew everything there is to Ellie. What would he try and do? And what was Lee afraid, why is he hiding? Is he related to Henry?

You know, I'm wondering. It seems abilities can be traits passed on through families, skip generations and whatnot no? So I wonder if Lee and Henry are related somehow and that's why Lee's scared.

I love this story, I really do(: