Reviews for Roadworks
11's-SevenofHearts chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I though that the pacing was a bit rushed and the character development could have been a little better. At least, the introductions could have been less abrupt. I was a little confused as to who Kit Swanson was when you first mentioned her. Also, there were some run-along sentences throughout. But despite these things, I still found your story to be enjoyable. :)