Reviews for The Forgotten Duke
Nobody Knows the Darkness chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Raven of the shades i really like your consept but i feel like the storyl was rapped up to quickly and that the epilouge wasnt truly and epilouge but more like a teaser for a second story, also if the school is unofficial how does she use it to make money? just some things to think about, see you in class tomorrow
disrhythmic chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I really enjoyed this! I like the contrast between the idyllic summer's day at the beginning and the sudden kidnapping. :) The epilogue was nice too - left it open for the reader. One thing you might want to look at is your dialogue. It's written well, but some of the proper punctuation is missing. All in all, I really liked it. :)
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