Reviews for Control
The Haiku Police chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
The HKP salute.
Yseulte chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Ahh, very nice!
Seimei chapter 1 . 6/13/2001
I would wait until wrting more haikus and put a whole bunch together, rather than put up one haiku at once. _ It was a good haiku, tho! _
Gevo chapter 1 . 5/29/2001
oh. this is so öpsa! loved it.
AtieKay chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
I like it...food for thought: if "you" let go, would she be retievable?