Reviews for Affection
PhrasesForTheYoung chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
This was really good, shame it's not longer.
Jodiexxx chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I liked this, a lot. :D

That hairdresser is so annoying. She's like a pedophile. Or something. LOL. Actually, I get the feeling that you described her as a friendly hairdresser. But because of James's reaction, I got a bit WHOA she'stotallytryingtohitonhim. Of course, she's not. ...I think. 8) James you jealous boy! How could you be so rude!

But I love those kinds of brocest relationships. The ones where the brothers are protective/jealous/possessive of each other and yet can't show it in public because technically they can't belong with each other. ;_; Tears me up inside, y'know. Anyway, here's my favorite bit:

"Don't be stupid. You know you can't embarrass me. You're bloody perfect. If anything, I should parade you around the streets, making everyone else jealous, because you're all mine. But it's just, mum, and people, you know. We can't be… together in public," James explained, caressing Matt's face.

YAY FOR THOSE LINES THAT GO, 'YOU'RE MINEMINEMINEMINE'. Ahem. So, uh, I actually like this spin-off better than the original story:x Because their age gap seems...smaller. Anyway...yay:D Thanks for a cute lil oneshot.

lunasea chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
LOVED IT. yet again