|Reviews for Dance|
| Vintage Writer chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
i love this, this is absolute brilliance 3 wow. just wow
| Musique Faerie chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
The minute I read this poem is like love at first sight. It was confusing at first, but when I saw the words in the middle, I understood: 'Dancing with the devil never ends.'
You should make more of these poems.
- Musique Faerie
| LoneRanger chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
| Adrenalin chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I like the format, it makes the two poems very easy to separate (though sometimes it is a shame). I also liked the opposition between the two readings, I imagined the character as either mad, delusional or bipolar.
It's a shame that it's so short I would have liked to see more of this, especially if you had elaborated on the subject of a mentally instable character (but I may be the only one seeing this here :p)