Reviews for Dance
Vintage Writer chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
i love this, this is absolute brilliance 3 wow. just wow
Musique Faerie chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
The minute I read this poem is like love at first sight. It was confusing at first, but when I saw the words in the middle, I understood: 'Dancing with the devil never ends.'

You should make more of these poems.

- Musique Faerie
LoneRanger chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Adrenalin chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I like the format, it makes the two poems very easy to separate (though sometimes it is a shame). I also liked the opposition between the two readings, I imagined the character as either mad, delusional or bipolar.

It's a shame that it's so short I would have liked to see more of this, especially if you had elaborated on the subject of a mentally instable character (but I may be the only one seeing this here :p)