Love this story 3! it's really interesting and well written. I'm growing to love 'mummy' more and more. Update soon!

Well I see that this won't be your average fairy-tale. I think could give a little more detail about the people of the town. Why is the princess faceless? How did they react when she first came?

Do keep it up, I'll take a look at Chapter 2 soon.

first off: Wow.

This is a really great story so far. I can't wait till the next chapter is out. I like how you came up with Rain's name.

There are too many unnecessary details. All detail and actions should contribute in some way to the plot of the story. Other than that its very interesting.

This was wonderful! I love the fact this almost follows the storyline of a fairytale but its got its on quirks and therefore was more interesting to read! I hope it doesn't move on to a cliche style but stays just the way it is! Please update soooooon!