Reviews for State Of In Between
thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I love it when you do free verse without rhyme. It always turns out so well. I can tell that you've been talking to women recently, because that's where the maybes always come from. I know that from experience.

I really enjoyed the rhythm. I like how this seems like it came fresh out of your math notebook that you use for jotting down poems that come to you in school. I can definitely see it here.

Your speaker seems pretty up on things, like he had a flash of insight or a sudden understanding. But he's still definitely a teenager in whole. I love it.

Great stuff, and thanks for your review of One day a gangly man told me. I love that poem. It's very near and dear.

Nice to hear from you!

-twb
XXXSyxAdeleXXX chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Wow love it. Really intriguing and philosophical way of seeing things! Well written