|Reviews for what will mother nature do to our country now?|
| TheGirlWithMoonlitEyes chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
I love this one. Well done!
| TheGirlWithMoonlitEyes chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
I do very much like the poem in itself, the descriptions you use, however I must criticise the beat to this. It may just be my opinion, but the uneven beats for each line go better without a rhyme, or the rhyme goes better with a continuous beat - For me, it breaks the poem up and it loses some emotion as a consequence. Other than that, I think this piece has amazing potential and good luck with any future works :)