Reviews for Awesomeverse
kuronekoevan chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
Yeah, mind blowing. Not bad, but will have to wait for the next chapters to see when the pieces fit. Had to pity Leo for the terrible school where he came from. Still, not an unpleasant read. Good luck.
kuronekoevan chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Not bad, but some people might be uneasy with the way things go flashback, but I think it's appropriate enough. Still, a space between every paragraph might make it easier to read. Just a personal opinion.