|Reviews for Sulfur|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/12/2014
Just completed this on Kindle! My goodness, those two can't catch a break in this story, huh? Haha your dedication in the beginning was quite appropriate. I was on the edge on my seat the whole time reading this. I could not stop reading (or cringing at times, haha)! The characters feel so alive and real to me now! I'll probably re-read Farro and Sulfur many times! You did a wonderful job with these stories, and I am excited to read your future works. Keep up the great work!
| Dominique Diane chapter 5 . 3/14/2014
YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS! I can't wait for the next part of the story. I really need to know what's going to happen!
| Conva chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
Sorry for not leaving a comment earlier - I loved Farro and Sulfur continued to be just as good! I really love how your main characters have flaws and make errors (some very big ones) but they are still likable because they are so very lifelike, they are humans. I've just bought both books for kindle on amazon to find out what will happen next and to re-read whenever I feel like it. Hope to read more from you soon!
| Emmy chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
"I lick my lips and taste its metallic notes on my lips." I don't know what it was about that sentence, but I just find it so poetic, the way you described it.
I love your work! You are such a brilliant, brilliant person! This is the second time I've read through your Farro/ Sulfur books and I can see all this little details I didn't notice the first time and how they all connect and hint at what'll come next.
How do you come up with all these ideas and get them on paper? You have written the most unique plot twists out of anyone I've ever seen. Seriously, you put more plot and conflict in one page than I've seen in whole books.
I've also fallen in love with your characters, especially Khensa and Bomani. They're all so human, having not just good in them, but also fear and selfishness and their own motivations. I like that.
I think Shana's got the right idea. But alas, Khensa is in denial.
Thank you for posting your work and sharing it with us all! You have made a fangirl out of me and that is not an easy feat.
| Reema.A chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
So I cam across your stories here and I instantly fell in love with the characters and the places - you write so vividly and so amazingly that I read Farro in under one day! I seriously couldn't stop... and then I get so pulled in to Sulfur only to find 5 chapters... on the plus side the books can be bought! On the negative side... I live somewhere where it'll be harder for me to get my hands on one of your books... I'm heartbroken T_T Seriously, when I saw that I would only be reading 5 chapters of this story I almost didn't keep going simply because it just hurt too much X-D
Anyways, your writing is beautiful, and it has been a while since a story has excited - or pulled me in this much!
| MileyRowling chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
| nababy123 chapter 33 . 11/23/2012
This is an amazing story. Both the sequel and the first novel were equally amazing, and I read both of them one after the other and just couldn't stop. It's so rare to find a truly good and well thought out story like this on this site, but you did it. I loved Bomani so much, and thought he was just the most complex and likable character. I was so glad they finally got together in the end, and lived happily ever after, like they deserve to after what they had been through. All in all, amazing job, and I look forward to more of your work. Never stop writing, you have a gift!
| RomanticaKH1 chapter 33 . 8/23/2012
Such an amazing story. I was so happy to finally see those two together. I have to say tough, I was surprised when Bo attacked Khensa at the river like that. I mean, I know they had to get together soon, and I kind of seen it coming, but it seemed like such a stark difference of Bomani's usual personality. I mean, he does the occasional flirt and comforting, which shows he secretly cares, but maybe it was being I was so immersed in Khensa's p.o.v. I forgot the Bo masks his emotions, therefore seeming nonchalant sometimes. It was a really great read, both books where, and I'm so sad to see it end. I honestly love this story much more then other. I don't know what it is about it, it's intoxicating, It keeps me coming back for more. I had to keep reading it. I promise to drop by Amazon and leave reviews as well. Thanks for the incredible story.
| Vengeful Authoress chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
i love torturing characters! makes the story more interesting :)
| Vengeful Authoress chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
cliff hangers are awesome! i love it when people use cliff hangers
| Vengeful Authoress chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
A good start! I can't wai to read the rest of it :)
| KML92 chapter 36 . 8/7/2012
First of all, I just wanted to say that the second book was absolutely fabulous. It's been my experience that sequels are never as good as the first one, but this one was just as good, if not better. I cried at a couple different points during the story which makes you a fabulous writer cuz it's not an easy thing to do to make me cry. On top of all that, I was up until 4 in the morning yesterday becasue I HAD to finish it. I HAD to know what was to become of Bomani and Khensa. I loved every second of both books and I just wanted to tell the author herself. Congrats again on getting published and being a little bit famous now! I promise to leave a review for both books on amazon. I would recommend these books to anyone!
| Cielai chapter 36 . 6/4/2012
I devoured these two stories, seriously. You have such a way of bending plots that are dramatic, but not overtly to the point of anything over done. I love all the characters, hating some where necessary(You managed to get me onto team Nessa in the end) . Very sad that I went through them so quickly, but I'll be purchasing them on Amazon to support you and everything you do in the future (:
| Wings27 chapter 5 . 5/18/2012
You're such an amazing author! As soon as I am done with Sulfer, I will go to Amazon and leave you a review. I'll also make sure to recommend Farro and Sulfer to my friends and tell them to review on Amazon as well!
| ColourCascade chapter 32 . 4/19/2012
Love it :) it was a kinda unexpected ending though, I thought it would end with something like they had a peaceful reign for 54 years before they carked it and their country was happy and everything. I like it though. And I really really like the bonus chapters from Bomanis point of view. I really wish you could do the part where she is like actually I destroyed my glamour and he goes wtf why do I like you then? In his head :) if you're still writing bonus chapters I think that would be awesome!