Reviews for The Adventures of Rini and Maydo!
Zia chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
HMMM... PRETTY GOOD! :D maybe you could change your perspective a little bit. I mean, you should proabably only have a couple of kids, I got kinds confused. But good.
Ram Attra chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

update now!
BurningDragon5 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
A crayon's POV...genius. XP

BD5
TexasHomeSlice chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
Haha! I like the crayons...
TexasHomeSlice chapter 2 . 8/6/2011
Aw! The munchkins are adorable!

I liiiiiike it...
laurenexplorin chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
hm...i like this story. it seems like it could be a cute series. i think you should definitelly continue. i think maydo was the cutest out of all the kids though :D hehehe yes, im playing favorites :D
BurningDragon5 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Funny, and you're right-it's cute! Update soon!
Chuly chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Thats a lot of kids. This is a great story I hope I am able to remember which one is which
TexasHomeSlice chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Yaydo, Maydo!

This is good!

Hehe.

The ORININAL Rini!