Reviews for Unions of Eden
AriaRose7 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Very nice :)
in theory chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
My grandmother's name was Lilith ;) I love how you portray her in this, and that second stanza is just perfect. I did find the continuous stream stretching across all of the stanzas to be a little ...meandering? Not exactly rambling, but not as controlled. Maybe it's not as big an issue as it seems to me, I know I have a problem.

Onward!

Jack