Reviews for Moon of Egypt
Reader chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Interesting idea but please fix your grammar, spelling and please learn how to properly use apostrophes.
Zireael07 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
This is good. I'd like to see more.
NariyahLove chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Oh my goodness, this fic was wonderful! Very good job. There aren't many fic's about Cleopatra Selene, but I must say this was one of the best I've read.

My favorite part?: "She wore a long, turquoise gown that complimented her caramel skin. Her raven black hair was in a tight braid and black kohl was smeared along the rims of her eyes- making her look as ferocious as Sekhmet." I can imagine her now! Very good describing words!

First of all, I love the fact that you acknowledge the fact that Cleopatra was BLACK! Not many people do.

Selene is adorable and yet smart and skillful. I love the relationship between her and her brothers. You made her character come to life!

Anyway, Love this story and please update soon. You should continue!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Keep going!