Reviews for One Photograph |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can completely understand where you're coming from because I realized after I read chapter 8 that there wasn't anywhere for the story to really go after that...but I do appreciate you for trying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really sad but it's okay; it happens. It's also great as a one-shot! I say leave it up. Maybe one day you'll feel inspired to write more about it. I think it is a great start to a longer story too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So are they going to talk about the last conversation? Ryder wants "US" and I honestly don't know what that means. Great update. Good luck in school...I remember those days. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah cliffhanger! Update soon...I'm so excited to hear what happens next. Great update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a great story! Please Update soon! ~Leeann |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snap! |
![]() ![]() YAY! I know it's not good that Victor cheated...but know Ryder and Liz can be together! And I love the way you staged the end! :D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The bed think is similar to what happen in Necessary Roughness on USA. But it was a great chapter. I can't wait for ryder's reaction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute lol. I think Victor might be up to some dirt of his own because he is neglecting his girlfriend. But thats not a good reason for Liz to cheat. Perhaps shes having out of love with Victor. Ryder I suspect he wants to tease Liz a little just for fun or maybe to push her away. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I saw that this story had more than one chapter it made me so happy because I was hoping that this story would progress into something more. And good job because this is exactly my kind of story so I can't wait to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh update soon! So much sexual tension I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should definitely make this into more than a oneshot because there are so may ways you could expand this...just sayin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really good. for some reason, i wanted liz to just kiss ryder even though she's engaged already. oh well, you can't get what you want all the time. great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() its really good! :) except im not sure why you labelled it as complete since you could write so much! you're really good at writing, keep it up and write more if you can! :) |